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Please don't put unfinished practice on Newgrounds. In my opinion, much more polish would be required before this game could be released. The idea of having a game based around a weird jump is cool. However, the game should feel like it is at the very least in a semi-finished state before you release it on a website where people go to play games.

Bugs:
The mouse doesn't snap.
The camera can be flipped upside down.
By holding jump and looking at the wall in the second level you can clip through walls.
The camera briefly clips into objects once in a while (Not a big deal.)

Problems:
The first level is clearly unfinished.
The second level looks completely different from the first.

davidpuralocura responds:

yeah i could have worked alot more on this game
im kinda new to making games soo there are some problems that i dont know how to fix
i thought it was not big of a deal the camara but you are right i shoud have fixed that one
this is a finished game even if its not polished to the best
thank you for this review
made me look some videos on the bugs

P.S.found the easter egg?

I'm sorry but I don't think this belongs on a games website. If I were you I would add more content and try to polish the game more. I was also able to run into what seems like a game-breaking bug in the first minute of gameplay. As soon as you open the text editor you can't type anything and the plus button at the bottom corner just doesn't work. If this is a bug then it needs to be fixed, being such an easy thing to run into. If this is not a bug then I feel as though the text editor needs to be redesigned, as it does properly convey how to use it to the player. The idea of this game is great and I know that it took work to create but it needs more game and polish and less random clicking. Feel free to correct anything that I said with a response. :)

I make games with Unity & GameMaker: Studio! Hopefully you enjoy them :)

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